Repetition

Repetition

Posted Sep 24, 2007 12:24 UTC (Mon) by malor (subscriber, #2973)
In reply to: Repetition by intgr
Parent article: What every programmer should know about memory, Part 1

Another little fix:

"reverting negative impact of the serialization and even increase the bandwidth."

would be more grammatically correct as,

"reverting the negative impact of the serialization and even increasing the bandwidth."

(add "the", add "ing".)

You could also drop "the" before both serialization and bandwidth, for improved flow. If it were my sentence, I'd write it this way:

"... reverting the negative impact of serialization, and even increasing total bandwidth."

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